Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Brad给你发来邮件，提到他上周作为交换生来到太原的一所学校学习，但感觉很难融入新学校。请你用英语给他回信，提一些建议。要点包括：

1.求助于父母和老师；

2.乐于助人；

3.参加活动……

注意：1.词数110左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Brad,

I am delighted to learn that you came to study at a senior high in Taiyuan as an exchange student last week. However, I am deeply sorry to hear that you find it difficult to fit in at your new school. It is my pleasure to offer you some advice.

For starters, you’d better seek help from your parents and teachers. Moreover, it is a good idea to help others when necessary. If you are always ready to help others, they will definitely enjoy your company. Lastly, why not take an active part in some activities?

I do hope my advice is of great help to you. Looking forward to a reply at your earliest convenience.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇提纲类写作。

第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Brad给你发来邮件，提到他上周作为交换生来到太原的一所学校学习，但感觉很难融入新学校。请你用英语给他回信，提一些建议。要点包括：1.求助于父母和老师；2.乐于助人；3.参加活动……

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：an exchange student (交换生)；deeply sorry (非常抱歉)；fit in (融入)；seek help(寻求帮助)；take an active part in (积极参加)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般过去时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。