Question

9．如今，我们身边不乏"低头族"．他们在与朋友聚会或乘坐交通工具时，常常低头忙于浏览手机．请简要描述此现象，并发表你的看法．
提示词：低头族 phubbing
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

Answer 1

分析 本文是关于"低头族"现象的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一描述"低头族"现象；二自己的看法．
高分句型：
1．Some people only stare at the screens of their phones，ignoring the people around them no matter when they take a bus，hold a party or even get together with their families．句子里，ignoring the people around them 是现在分词做伴随状语；no matter when 引导让步状语从句，伴随"无论何时"．
有一些人无论是在与朋友家人聚会或乘坐交通工具时，他们常常低头忙于浏览手机，不理睬周围的人．
2．Worse still，they will not miss the chance of surfing the Internet or playing the games when they cross the road，which is likely to cause serious accidents and frighten their lives．句子里which引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句；is likely to 表示"可能"．
更糟糕的是，当他们过马路时，他们也会上网浏览或玩游戏，这很可能造成严重的交通事故，威胁他们的生命．

解答 The phenomenon that people are always phubbing is becoming more and more popular．Some people only stare at the screens of their phones，ignoring the people around them no matter when they take a bus，hold a party or even get together with their families．【高分句型一】Worse still，they will not miss the chance of surfing the Internet or playing the games when they cross the road，which is likely to cause serious accidents and frighten their lives．【高分句型二】（描述"低头族"现象）
It is high time that we threw away the phone and raised our heads up．Do cherish the ones around us and appreciate the splendid scenery ahead of us．（自己的看法）

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