Question

14．假设你是延川中学的高二学生李华，鉴于对本县交通拥堵的见闻和感受．请你根据以下要点用英语给相关部门领导写一封信．
1．延川交通堵塞情况；
2．延川交通堵塞主要原因；   
     3．你的建议．
要求：1．可以适当发挥；
      2．字数控制在100词左右．
Dear Sir，
I'm an 18-year-old student from Yanchuan Senior High School．                           
Best wishes!
Yours，
                                                                           Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 考查应用文中的书信的写作．要点都已经给出，书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略．但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采．审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出．难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述．还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯．
亮点句型一：With a large population and numbers of automobiles increasing，some roads still remain unimproved，which surely lead to problems．随着人口和汽车数量的增加，一些道路仍然没有得到改善，这必导致一些问题．句中With a large population and numbers of automobiles increasing是with的复合结构在句中做状语；which引导的是非限制性定语从句，which指代整个主句的内容．
亮点句型二：In a word，I believe that we can improve our traffic condictions if we try our best．总之，我相信，如果我们努力改善我们的交通状况．这是一个宾语从句，that we can improve our traffic condictions if we try our best做动词believe的宾语．．

解答 Dear Sir，
    I'm an 18-year-old student from Yanchuan Senior High School．With the developing of the ecnomic，the traffic conditions in Yanchuan is becoming more and more worse，especially in the rush hour．People waste a lot of time in waiting for the bus or in their way home．With a large population and numbers of automobiles increasing，some roads still remain unimproved，which will surely lead to problems．（亮点句型一）【现象及原因】
    It's time that the government took measures to improve the traffic conditiongs．In my view，first，government should broad the road to make more cars pass through．second，people should be encouraged to go by bus or bike instead of pravite cars，this will definitely reduce the air pollution as well．Third，people can go by subway in the rush hours．In a word，I believe that we can improve our traffic condictions if we try our best．（亮点句型二）【建议】

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．