Question

假定你是李华，于2014年4月1日搭乘国外某航空公司航班(Flight BA793)回国后，发现遗失了一个行李箱（suitcase）现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信，请他们帮你寻找。
信件要点包括：
1.陈述写信原因;     2.简要描述该行李;   3.说明其重要性；4.期待回复并表示感谢
注意：1.信件格式已经给出，不计入总词数；2.词数120左右
Dear Sir or Madam， 
                                                                                             
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
Best wishes,
Yours truly,
LiHua

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua. I took the flight BA793 on April 1, 2014. But when I came to my home, I found I lost a suitcase. I am writing to you to request you to help me find it back.
My suitcase is a small blue one with a zip. There is a label on the handle with my name and address on it. It is really important for me, because I had put all important documents in it, including my ID card, passport and so on. Besides, it is my father who sent it to me on my birthday.
Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

解析试题分析:写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此首先要认真阅读前面的提示，确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】本文分三段写出了写信的原因，第一段，写信的原因。第二段描述行李和它的重要性；最后表示感谢。内容完整，层次清楚。并注意了句子开头的变化和衔接。同时文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如look forward to、Thanks for和when、because等引导的状语从句。
考点:提纲类作文。