Question

【题目】转眼新的一年已经来到。在过去的一年中，帮助和关心你的人很多，但此时此刻你最想感谢的人是谁？请你根据提示写一篇英语短文，内容包括：

1. 你所感谢的对象；

2. 感谢他（她）的原因；

3. 你想对他（她）说的话。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Thanks to the generous help and selfless love of Ms. Wang, I have become more confident and made great progress in my subjects, especially in English in the last year.

It is Ms. Wang who, regardless of her health and rest time, always accompany us in the classroom, giving us timely help. It is Ms. Wang who is always ready to give me right guidance when I am at a loss. It is Ms. Wang who has professional teaching methods which benefits us a lot. As a result, I show great fancy in English now. Ms. Wang is my model, who I will try my best to be.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇英语短文，感谢你最想感谢的人。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和现在完成时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1.表达感谢

1）感谢的对象。（Ms. Wang）

2）感谢的原因。（the reasons why you show thanks for her）

3) 想说对她说的话。（what you want to say to her ?）

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

selfless love; made great progress; regardless of; accompany; timely help; is ready to; right guidance; benefit; at a loss; As a result; show great fancy in.

第三步：连词成句

1. Thanks for the generous help and selfless love of Ms. Wang.

2. I have made great progress in my subjects.

3. regardless of her health and rest time

4. I am at a loss.

5. As a result, I show great fancy in English now.

6. You accompany us in the classroom, and give us timely help.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改