Question

1．第二节 
假设你是红星中学高三的学生李华．请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍上周你被班级推荐参加学校英文书写大赛的完整过程，并以"Our English Handwriting Contest"为题，给校刊"英语角"写一篇英文稿件．
注意：词数不少于60．

Our English Handwriting Contest
Last week we held an English handwriting contest in our school．
Two classmates and I were recommended to attend it on behalf of my class．For the whole week，I devoted myself to the practice after school．Taking my English teacher's advice，I paid special attention to writing certain letters and the way I held my pen．On Friday，about 50 students from different classes，including me，took part in the contest．Every one of us tried hard．When it was announced that I won the first prize，I was very happy and proud．
Beautiful handwriting makes both reading and writing a pleasure，which is of great importance to us students．I will continue practicing it．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇看图作文，认真读图，从图画中看出反映的问题，写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．
亮点句型一：Taking my English teacher's advice，I paid special attention to writing certain letters and the way I held my pen．采纳了我的英语老师的意见，我特别注意写一些信和我拿笔的方式．本句中用现在分词Taking my English teacher's advice在句中做状语； I held my pen．是一个定语从句，修饰先行词the way，在从句中做方式状语，所以省略的that．the way 做先行词在定语从句中做状语时，关系词可以用that，in which 或者省略．
亮点句型二：Beautiful handwriting makes both reading and writing a pleasure，which is of great importance to us students．漂亮的书法使阅读和写作成为一种乐趣，这对我们学生很重要．这是一个非限制性定语从句，which指代前边整个句子的意思．

解答 Our English Handwriting Contest
   Last week we held an English handwriting contest in our school．
  Two classmates and I were recommended to attend it on behalf of my class．For the whole week，I devoted myself to the practice after school．Taking my English teacher's advice，I paid special attention to writing certain letters and the way I held my pen．（亮点句型一）On Friday，about 50 students from different classes，including me，took part in the contest．Every one of us tried hard．When it was announced that I won the first prize，I was very happy and proud．
     Beautiful handwriting makes both reading and writing a pleasure，which is of great importance to us students．（亮点句型二）I will continue practicing it．

点评 看图作文是以图画或图表来提供目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等场景，要求作者借助图画，通过联想将一组画面的直观内容转换成传神达意的文字形式，用于反映图中所表现的思想内容，从写作体裁上看，可说明介绍，可叙事记人，可写景状物，也可以发表议论．看图作文主要考查学生的观察能力、分析能力、想象能力、创造能力和语言表达能力．