Question

假设你是我校高一学生李华，从网络新闻得知有人大肆捕杀东北虎，感到十分气愤。请根据以下内容，给中国日报（China Daily）报社编辑写一封信，就此事发表你的观点并对保护东北虎提出你的建议。

注意：1. 词数:100-120词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 参考词汇：东北虎Siberian tiger

Dear Editor,

I’ve just learnt the news online about _________________________________________

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                       

                                                                                        

                                                                                             

                                                                               

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                         

                                                                                           

                                                                                      

                                                                                             

                                                                         

                                                                                   

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Editor,

I’ve just learnt the news online about killing Siberian tigers and I am so sorry.

I think Siberian tigers must be protected well, or they will die out. It’s time that we took action to protect them from being killed.

It’s said that the population of Siberian tigers is getting smaller and smaller. I think there are two main reasons for this. This first reason is that some people kill Siberian tigers for their skins and bones to earn money. The other reason is that too many trees have been cut down, which has destroyed the places where Siberian tigers used to live.

We should work together to make a pleasant home for both human beings and animals. I hope that the government should pass laws to protect Siberian tigers and punish the tiger hunters. Because protecting animals is protecting ourselves.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文。假设你是我校高一学生李华，从网络新闻得知有人大肆捕杀东北虎，感到十分气愤。请根据以下内容，给中国日报（China Daily）报社编辑写一封信，就此事发表你的观点并对保护东北虎提出你的建议。需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。注意一定要发表自己的观点并对保护东北虎提出自己的建议。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数100-120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮点说明】This first reason is that some people kill Siberian tigers for their skins and bones to earn money.这里含有一个表语从句；The other reason is that too many trees have been cut down, which has destroyed the places where Siberian tigers used to live. 这里含有一个表语从句和一个非限制性定语从句。I hope that the government should pass laws to protect Siberian tigers and punish the tiger hunters. 这里含有一个宾语从句。

考点：话题类书面表达