Question

【题目】假定你是李华，《芝麻街》杂志征稿讨论“中学生是否能带手机进入学校”问题。请 你给编辑写一封信说明你校情况并发表你的看法。要点包括：

1. 你校手机使用情况；

2. 带手机进学校的好处和坏处；

3. 你的看法和建议

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Editor,

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Yours Faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor

There is a growing concern over the smart phone use among teenagers at school. Though our school makes it clear that phones are not allowed, a minority of students tend to ignore it. Once getting caught, they are severely punished. Now I’d like to go into details of the topic.

In fact, we often enjoy a lot of benefits of phones. Firstly, it enables us to keep up-to-date with the current events. Besides, it’s likely that we encounter like-minded people and share common interests. Apart from that, smart phone can boost multitasking and decision-making ability. Nevertheless, the disadvantages of phone use should also be brought to our attention. In terms of our health, long exposure to smart phone does great harm to our eyes and affects brain development. For students, there is nothing like smart phone that gets us distracted when we are trying to concentrate on study

After weighing the pros and cons, I conclude that it’s never a good idea to allow students to mobile phones to school. In everyday life, we should use phones moderately and wisely.

【解析】

本文是应用文中的书信，要求考生把自己当成李华，《芝麻街》杂志征稿讨论“中学生是否能带手机进入学校”问题。请给编辑写一封信，说明你校的情况并发表看法。本文要求考生自行组织要点，总体难度较大。

第1步：审题。根据文字提示可知本文是一封书信，要求考生把自己当成李华，给《芝麻街》写信说明你校学生是否带手机进入校园的情况并发表你的看法。全文以一般现在时和第三人称为主。

第2步：组织要点。（1）你校手机使用情况：尽管学校明文禁止携带手机进入学校，但仍有少数同学带手机进校。（2）带手机进入学校的好处：及时了解最新事件；可以与志趣相投的人分享共同的兴趣爱好。提高处理多任务的能力；坏处：伤害眼睛；影响脑部发育；分散学习精力。（3）你的看法和建议：应该禁止学生带手机进入校园，学生应该更为合理使用手机。

第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为a growing concern、a minority of 、ignore、keep up-to-date with the current events、share common interests.、bring to our attention、

get sb distracted等。同时注意书信的惯用语和习惯表达。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。