Question

健康之重要人尽皆知。许多青少年不注重健康问题，假期尤甚。长时间看电视，通宵上网聊天、玩游戏。导致的危害如：影响视力，身体虚弱，缺乏人际交往。 简述你的看法，提出你的建议。

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Have a healthy lifestyle

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Have a healthy lifestyle

As we all know, health is very important. Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life.

However, many teenagers don't pay any attention to their health, especially during the holiday. And they spend too much time watching TV, playing games and chatting on the Internet all night, which is bad for their health. First, this may make them get near-sighted. Besides, their bodies become much weaker. Thirdly, they will lose the chance to communicate with others face to face as they never go out, which may have a bad effect on their mental health.

In my opinion, they should spend less time in front of the TV or the computer. Go out to take some exercises, play some sports and visit some and have a healthy lifestyle.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇给出汉语提示的书面表达。文章给出的提示较为详细，学生只要按照汉语提示连句成文即可。成文要注意：1.内容要齐全；健康之重要人尽皆知。许多青少年不注重健康问题，假期尤甚。长时间看电视，通宵上网聊天、玩游戏。导致的危害如：影响视力，身体虚弱，缺乏人际交往。 简述你的看法，提出你的建议。2.人称：第三人称；3.时态：一般现在时；4.适当使用一些高级词汇、短语和句型，以提高文章的档次；5.恰当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章表达自然、流畅。

【亮点说明】使用了高级句型倒装句：Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life.使用了定语从句：As we all know,。。。。 which is bad for their health. 。。。which may have a bad effect on their mental health.

使用了短语：pay any attention to；spend too much time doing sth；Go out to do sth；连词和插入语：However, First, Besides, In my opinion等。

考点：考查学生英语语言综合运用能力。