Question

【题目】假定你是是李华。你的英国朋友Edward 正在学习汉语，他希望你给他推荐一个适合他学习汉语的网站。请你根据以下内容给他回复邮件。

推荐网站：www.edchinese.com

网站内容：

1、中文情景对话，中国风俗，中国电影，中国歌曲、成语和唐诗等；

2.有老师在线答疑解惑。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Edward,

I’m more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese.

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Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Edward,

I’m more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. I’d like to recommend www.edchinese.com to you. It’s a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese, especially for beginners.

Firstly, it provides you with a variety of online resources, such as Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs. Besides, it will help you learn Chinese in interesting and effective ways. Here you can learn to sing Chinese songs, enjoy Tang poems and watch Chinese movies. More importantly, there are teachers online to whom you can turn for help. And all is free of charge.

I hope you will find this website attractive and helpful.

Wish you a happy learning time.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

这篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，推荐网站：www.edchinese.com网站内容：

1.中文情景对话，中国风俗，中国电影，中国歌曲、成语和唐诗等；2.有老师在线答疑解惑。第二，写作以第三人称为主，一、二人称兼有。第三，时态为一般现在时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为四段。第一段，你给他推荐一个适合他学习汉语的网站。推荐网站：www.edchinese.com。第二段，网站内容：1、中文情景对话，中国风俗，中国电影，中国歌曲、成语和唐诗等。2.有老师在线答疑解惑。第三段，表达希望。第四段，良好祝愿。其中第二段为重点段落。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语：recommend ，a variety of，Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs，interesting and effective，sing Chinese songs, enjoy Tang poems and watch Chinese movies， free of charge，attractive and helpful.

第四步：确定较为高级的句子:It’s a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese. there are teachers online to whom you can turn for help.

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:Firstly, Besides, More importantly.

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。

【亮点说明】

文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式如:It’s a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese. there are teachers online to whom you can turn for help. I’m more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. 高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次。整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。