Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你们上周参与以“Building a Civilized City District”为主题的班级活动的全过程。 注意：词数不少于 60。 提示词：敬老院 geracomium

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Answer 1

【答案】Last week, we took part in a series of activities with the theme of building a civilized city district, which turned out to be extremely rewarding.

To make our work more effective, in Monday’s class meeting, we discussed heatedly and at last agreed to do some specific things for the nearby community. Considering a bus stop as a window of city civilization, after school we volunteered to be guides leading the passengers patiently to wait in line to get on bus. To our delight, a lot of people got to know the importance of civilized behavior and the traffic went much smoother than usual. Respecting the elderly is a Chinese traditional virtue and a symbol of civilization as well. So on Wednesday afternoon, we went to accompany the old people in Pingguoyuan Geracomium and some students even made some specialty dishes for them. The bright smiles on the faces of the elderly are the biggest reward for our efforts

Then came the experience sharing meeting, when I was honored to make a report on behalf of my class. I feel proud to do my bit for the society and believe that small efforts made by everyone can help build a more civilized city district.

【解析】

本文书面表达属于看图作文。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一篇看图作文：假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你们上周参与以“Building a Civilized City District”为主题的班级活动的全过程。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：took part in a series of activities（参加一系列的活动）；To make our work more effective（为了使工作更有效）；the importance of civilized behavior and the traffic（文明行为和交通的重要性）；help build a more civilized city district.（帮助建设更加文明的城区）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。