Question

10．假定你是李华，正在新西兰学习．你计划寒假期间在当地旅行，请写一封e-mail向旅行社询问相关的旅行信息．要点如下：
 1．旅行信息（如景点等）；
 2．当地特色（如食品等）；
  3．注意事项．
注意：1．词数：100左右；
  2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数；
3．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student，studying in New Zealand．I'm writing to 
                                                    
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
As we know，New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more details about these．正如我们知道的，新西兰以其漂亮的景色和名胜古迹而闻名，我想了解更多关于它的事．
高分句型二：
Besides，I am also interested in the local food there．除此以外，我也对当地的美食很感兴趣．
句型一 ①As we know 该句是由as引导的非限制性定语从句，as 替代后面整个句子的内容
            ②New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery…谓语部分使用了重要短语be famous fou 因..而闻名
句型二  I am also interested in the local food there．该句的谓语部分使用了固定短语 be interested in 对..感兴趣

解答 Dear Sir and Madam，
    I am Li Hua，a Chinese student，studying in Zealand．I am writing to ask for information about your agency's New Zealand's travel for the winter vacation．（说明原因）
   My friend and I plan to travel in the country．Could you tell me the departure time and traveling routes？As we know，New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more details about these．（高分句型一）Besides，I am also interested in the local food there．（高分句型二）How much do I have to pay for the travel？At length，are there other things I should be aware of？
   I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience．（提出期望）
   Sincerely Yours，
   Li Hua

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，本篇给出的写作要点极为简单，因此要求考生在作答时适度的发散思维，紧密联系提纲要求写作，语言应准确无误，简洁明了，让人能一目了然．