Question

假定你是Amy，收到网友李华的电子邮件，说他上高中后，发现英语难学，现在正因成绩难以提高而犯难。为此，请你给他写一封回信。

要点如下：

1.要相信自己，不要放弃。信心是成功的关键和前提；

2.制定一个英语学习计划，如：早读、记日记和复习语法等；

3.找一份与教材同步的英语报纸, 可以从中学会许多知识。

词数120~150词。信心confidence；关键因素 element

Dear Li Hua,

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

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Yours truly,

Amy

Answer 1

Dear Li Hua,

I’m glad to have received your letter but I’m sorry to hear that you are having some difficulties with your English study. The following is my advice for you and I wish it will be of some help.

First, believe yourself. Confidence is the most important element of success. As long as you have it, nothing is impossible.

Second, make a plan for your English study. For example , keep on reading English aloud in the morning, keep a diary in English everyday and go over the grammar points in the evening.

Third, get an English newspaper to go with the textbook and you will learn a lot from it.

I hope you make great progress in your English study!

Yours truly,

Amy

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求给网友李华写一封回信，就如何学习高中英语，给李华提一些建议。写作要点包括：要相信自己；制定英语学习计划；使用英语报纸等三个方面。词数在120-150词之间，注意使用参考词汇；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：范文涵盖了所有的写作要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；范文还使用了定语从句、状语从句等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：宾语从句①that you are having some difficulties with your English study，②you make great progress in your English study；条件句As long as you have it, nothing is impossible.等，语法知识运用娴熟，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；

篇章结构方面：范文注意使用but, first, second, for example, third等来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得更有条理；

短语和搭配方面：范文使用了be glad to do, have difficulties with sth, be of help, keep on, go over, learn a lot from, make progress in等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。

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