Question

书面表达 （满分30分）
科技发展给人们带来便利的同时也引发了很多困扰：人际间的沟通困难、生存环境恶化、疾病蔓延…面对这些问题，我们将何去何从？
1. 根据你的体会，结合具体事例，谈谈自己的看法和建议。
2. 词数120左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入词数。
With the fast development of technology, we enjoy its convenience as well as suffer the troubles___________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

With the fast development of technology, we enjoy its convenience as well as suffer the troubles which we human beings can never afford to ignore.
As is seen everywhere, people nowadays live a life on the go with a mobile phone which makes them available at any time. However, they may bend over the phone even when they are sitting face to face, lacking in heart-to-heart communication./ Meanwhile , the industry brings about more products as well as polluted air and water. With PM2.5 filling the air, we, especially the young and the old, fall victim to the worsening air. /What’s worse, we are faced with more serious food problems which in turn contribute to more deadly diseases like cancers.
As a matter of fact, human beings are to blame for all these problems. If we wish to leave our next generations a still beautiful world, we have to take action from now on. Stop destroying the earth by cutting down trees and turning green land into concrete./ Stop pouring waste into rivers and oceans to protect the water source. /No longer waste materials and food to save natural resources for our future generations. /What’s the most important is to educate the public and carry out the laws firmly. Hope our combined efforts will pay off one day.

解析试题分析：本文的写作，首先举例说明手机所带来的好处的同时也引起了问题，使我们缺乏心对心的沟通lacking in heart-to-heart communication.工业的快速发展也污染了空气和水polluted air and water.食品安全问题困扰着我们，导致了很多致命的疾病contribute to more deadly diseases like cancers.然后对出现的这些现象提出自己的建议和看法As a matter of fact, human beings are to blame for all these problems.如停止砍伐森林Stop destroying the earth by cutting down trees，节约资源不铺张浪费No longer waste materials and food to save natural resources for our future generations.最重要的是What’s the most important is教育人们，严格实现法律educate the public and carry out the laws firmly.最后一句话进行表达自己的希望憧憬Hope our combined efforts will pay off one day.
考点：提纲类写作
点评：提纲类写作的文章较开放式的文体，比较好写。学生在写作的过程中，首先思路要清晰，要对所表达的句子通顺的说出来，遇到不会的要学会替换所用语，来达到同样的意思。在每一篇作文中，对于表达观点的句子，都要用上起承转合的连词来加强文章的层次感，适当运用俗语，如when it comes to当谈到，运用平时常用的句式来使文章富有变化，表达地道得体。