Question

19．假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡（Singapore）举办夏令营（the summer camp），欢迎各国学生参加．请写一封电子邮件申请参加．内容主要包括：
1、自我介绍（包括英语能力）；
2、参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）；
3、希望获准．
注意：
1、词数110以上；
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3、信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a middle school student from China．I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it．I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it．I've been learning English for 10 years，and I speak fluent English．What's more，I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well．I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp．
Looking forward to your reply!
Faithfully yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封申请信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：1、自我介绍；2．书信的目的；3．自己的英语能力；4．参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）；5．希望获准．
高分句型：
1．I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it．句子里that引导定语从句，代指先行词the announcement of the summer camp，做have posted 的宾语；am interested in 表示"对某事感兴趣"．
我看到你们在互联网上发布的夏令营的通知，我对此很感兴趣．
2．What's more，I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well．句子里What's more表示"此外"； learn 和tell是并列结构，做 be able to 的宾语；as well表示"也"．
此外，我能够给其他国家的学生介绍中国并且也能够了解他们的国家．

解答 One possible version
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a middle school student from China．（自我介绍）I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it．【高分句型一】I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it．（书信的目的）I've been learning English for 10 years，and I speak fluent English．（自己的英语能力）What's more，I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well．【高分句型二】（参加意图）I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp．（希望获准）
Looking forward to your reply!
Faithfully yours，
Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
书面表达不仅反映在表达内容上，也反映在书面形式上．一定要注意单词拼写正确，书写规范，字迹工整，卷面力求整洁，正确使用标点符号，使别人看起来耳目一新，具有整体美感，从而提高自己的得分档次．