Question

假定英主事课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请您修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语文错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜钱（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只充许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 with→on

 去掉so

 have→has

 healthy→health

 which→what

 paid 后加 a

 her→his

 step→stepped

 picture→pictures

 many→much

【解析】

试题分析：本篇短文介绍了一个兢兢业业工作的老师--Mr Johnson。他每天把时间都用在工作上，睡眠很少也几乎不休息以至于病倒了。学生们和其他老师都很担心他，当作者去探望他的时候，他却正在病床上看和学生们一起的合影。。。

 考查动词搭配。he spends too much time with his work. 固定搭配spend money / time on sth. 所以把介词with改为on。

 考查连词用法。With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. 句中so 是连词应该连接两个句子，而前面With little sleep and hardly any break是介词短语，所以把so去掉。

 考查主谓一致。Hard work have made him very ill. 句中hard work 是不可数名词，所以谓语动词要用单数形式，所以把 have改为has。

 考查名词用法。He has ruined his healthy . 物主代词his 后应该跟名词，所以把healthy改为health。

 考查名词性从句的连接词。That is which other teachers say.  that is 后是表语从句，which意思是“哪个，哪些”，应该有选择范围，所以把which改为what。

 考查冠词用法。I paid visit to Mr. Johnson.   pay a visit to sb是固定短语 “拜访某人” ， paid 后加不定冠词 a 。

 考查代词用法。I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. 从文章可知作者去拜访Mr.Johnson，所以把 her改为his。

 考查动词时态。Quietly I step into the room. 文章是叙述过去的事情，所以step改为stepped。

 考查名词单复数。looking at some of the picture we had taken together. Picture是可数名词，而且前面有some 修饰，所以把picture改为pictures。

 考查副词用法he missed us just as many as we missed him. 此处修饰动词miss应该用副词，many不能修饰动词，所以把many改为much。

考点：考查短文改错。