Question

【题目】假如你是高三学生李华，和表妹王芳即将参加2015年高考。请你结合自己的情况，用英语给表妹写一封建议信，建议她利用好高考前50天，考出好成绩。内容包括：

● 认真学习

● 调适心态

● 适度锻炼

● 其他方面

注意：

(1)词数不少于80；

(2)请在答题卡上作答；

(3)开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

Dear Wang Fang,

How are you lately?________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Wang Fang,

How are you recently?

I am writing to give you some suggestions on study and life. For Senior 3 students, time is precious. It is high time we took effective measures to live our life to the fullest.

First of all, I highly propose we make the most of the time in class, following our teachers. Besides, we tend to get anxious with time going by. Take it easy. More importantly, just as an old saying goes, Health is wealth. That is why we have to spend some time exercising regularly. Tired as we are, we are lucky and happy with so many teachers, friends, and our parents standing behind us. We may refer to them for timely help whenever we need it.

Do you like my advice? I do hope we will succeed in the entrance examination and be admitted to our ideal universities. Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：好作文应该是紧扣文章主题，遵循特定的文体格式，选用恰当的语言合理组织文章结构，内容统一、连贯，语法、拼写、标点正确，用词恰当。为了避免太多单词拼写错误，语法错误，不要为了追求词语的华丽而堆积一些自己也没把握的单词，不要刻意追求长句而写一些自己不知对错的有多个从句组成的长句。考试时最好选择自己最有把握的词汇，短语，句式。要注意用正确的时态。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如around the corner ，communicate with ，am determined to, am grateful to, pay special attention to,还运用了if，where引导的状语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：To begin with，In this way，Besides, What’s more等等。