Question

【题目】假如你是李华，因病需要向你的外教Peter请假一天。请用英语写一封电子邮件请假，主要内容包括：

1.请假时间（一天，2月8日，本周三）；

2. 说明事由（牙痛，需要就医）；

3. 如何弥补耽误的课程；

4. 表达感谢。

注意：

1.词数100左右

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 格式已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

Dear Peter,

I would like to know if I could ask for a casual leave of absence for one day on February 8th, this Wednesday.

This morning I received a telephone call from my dentist, urging me to go to him for immediate treatment of my teeth. I have been experiencing a serious pain, depriving me of my sleep during the past week. The situation could worsen, should infection occur.

Concerning my classes I will miss, I think I can make up for them in the evening at home. If possible, could you please send me the learning materials used in class? I apologize for the inconvenience my absence from study may cause.

Thank you for your consideration and I’m grateful for the care and help you are generously offering all the time!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是提纲类写作，要点已给出。可根据要点分四段来写，第一段提出请假要求，并说明请假时间；第二段说明事由；第三段说明如何弥补耽误的课程；第四段表达感谢。注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次；注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅。注意文章的字数控制，100单词左右。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇写请假的电子邮件，格式正确，内容齐全，结构布局合理，采用三段式，同时句中使用高级句子。I would like to know if I could ask for a casual leave of absence for one day on February 8th, this Wednesday.if引导宾语从句；This morning I received a telephone call from my dentist, urging me to go to him for immediate treatment of my teeth.现在分词表伴随状态；I have been experiencing a serious pain, depriving me of my sleep during the past week.现在完成进行时态和现在分词表达自然的结果；If possible, could you please send me the learning materials used in class?省略句和问句完美结合。