Question

你的英国朋友正在做一个课题：世界各地的生日庆祝方式。他请你介绍中国学生过生日的方式。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文：
一、通常方式
1. 生日聚会
2. 生日礼物
3. 生日祝福
二、我认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由
﹡词数：120左右

Answer 1

Chinese students celebrate their birthdays in different ways, but the most common way is to have fun drinking, singing and dancing. On the birthday, one usually receives nice gifts and good wishes from friends and parents. Sometimes, parents will prepare a special dinner or a cake to show their love for their children.
Since birthday celebration is one of the important activities in one’s life, it can be done in more meaningful ways. For example, we can buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal for our mothers on that day. In this way, we express thanks to our parents in return for their love.

试题分析：考查半开放性作文。介绍的是中国学生过生日的方式，文章只是给出了简单的大纲。在生日聚会的方式以及场所方面，做具体的介绍。在个人认为有意义的庆祝方式时给出去多种方式。要使用合适的连接词来连接全文，使文章成为一个整体，同时使用高级词汇和高级句型来提高文章的层次。
点评：半开放性作文的写作要注意要点的梳理要到位，不能有遗漏。同时对考生的谋篇布局的能力要求较高，要合理的分配文章的要点，运用高级词汇和句型以及连接词让各要点连接成流畅的短文。