Question

假设你现在正参加一场英语演讲比赛，你抽到的演讲题目是Smile for Life, and Every Day will be Sunshine, 请你就该话题展开演讲。你的演讲必须包含以下三个方面的内容：
1.你对此话的理解； 2. 用一个事例来支持你的理解； 3 .总结发言。
注意：词数120左右。首尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Ladies and Gentlemen,
It’s my honor to give a speech here. My topic of speech is “Smile for Life, and Every Day will be Sunshine”.
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Thanks for your attention!

Answer 1

Ladies and Gentlemen,
It’s my honour to give a speech here. My topic of speech is “Smile for Life, and Every Day will be Sunshine”. It conveys the message that positive attitude really counts in our life. Once we adopt a positive attitude towars life, we may overcome whatever difficulty there is in our way, realize our dreams and gain success.
Here I share one of my experiences with you. With the College Entrance Examination drawing near, I was filled with great anxiety. Under great pressure, I couldn’t apply myself to study, resulting in failing an important examination. And you can guess, I got very frustrated. I remember clearly when I was in a bad mood, my headteacher, Miss Zhang, approached me and gave me a badge with a big smile on it and said, “In life we all have those moments when we can’t achieve what we want. It is natural. Don’t allow those moments to weaken you, but turn them into motivation and let them inspire you.” The badge she gave to me was a reminder which provided me with constant encouragement to smile for life. Consequently, I gained what I deserved in the next examination.
As we can see in the story, it is an optimistic attitude that matters most of all. It gives you the confidence to confront tough difficulties and with smile , you can improve your result to achieve anything you want in life.
Thanks for your attention!

试题分析：本篇书面表达要求写一篇题为“Smile for life, and every day will be sunshine”的演讲稿。内容要求包括三个方面，所以在结构安排上可以采用三段式，来分别介绍三方面的内容。此外，为了充实文章内容，可以充分发挥想象力，适当增加细节。在语言方面，因为本文要求写的是演讲稿所以语言要有感染力，而且还要注意连接词的正确运用，以使文章内容连贯，语言自然流畅。
【亮点说明】本篇范文在内容形式上都符合演讲稿的要求，而且三段式的段落安排也使文章结构清晰明了。文中高级词汇adopt、Consequently、approach、drawing near的使用显示了作者对词汇的准确把握能力。而强调句it is an optimistic attitude that matters most of all.，状语从句Once we adopt a positive att非限制性定语从句：itude towards life,定语从句which provided me with constant encouragement to smile for life As we can see in the story, it is an optimistic attitude that matters most of all.和短语With the College Entrance Examination drawing near、Just then等多变的句式也显示了作者深厚的语言功底，是文章的一大亮点。此外，作者以自身的经历为例更增添了文章的亲和力和感召力。总之，这是一篇非常优秀的范文。