Question

假如你是学生会主席张凡，学校安排你给即将到你校任教的外籍教师Snow推荐一名学生帮手（assistant）。请根据以下要点给他写封推荐信。

1.欢迎Snow的到来

2.推荐李华为学生帮手（高二年级学生，男，17岁，）

3.介绍李华当帮手的优势（电脑，沟通能力，英语水平）

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.不要逐句翻译，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.信件开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Snow,

I'm Zhang Fan, chairman of the Students' Union. __________________________________

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Answer 1

Dear Snow,

I'm Zhang Fan, chairman of the Students' Union. It is a pleasure and an honor for me and for the whole school and students to have you teach in our school next semester.

Now, I’d like to recommend Li Hua, a Senior 2 student, aged17, to be your assistant. He is an excellent boy in our school and is worth trusting. He can speak English very fluently as if he was a native Englishman, so you can talk to him freely. Besides, he is able to operate the computer flexibly. This can help you make something like posters. And he will show you his communicating ability as well, which is strength for organizing activities. I hope you can have a pleasant cooperation with Li Hua. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to ask me.

Looking forward to your coming soon.

Yours sincerely,

Zhang Fan

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文。假如你是学生会主席张凡，学校安排你给即将到你校任教的外籍教师Snow推荐一名学生帮手（assistant）。请根据以下要点给他写封推荐信。1.欢迎Snow的到来2.推荐李华为学生帮手（高二年级学生，男，17岁，）3.介绍李华当帮手的优势（电脑，沟通能力，英语水平）写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意词数100左右。

【亮点说明】And he will show you his communicating ability as well, which is strength for organizing activities.这里含有一个定语从句；I hope you can have a pleasant cooperation with Li Hua.这里含有一个宾语从句。

考点：提纲类书面表达