Question

近几年，全球变暖越来越受到关注，越来越多的人为组织全球变暖做出贡献，因此一种新的生活方式诞生了——低碳生活。请就Low Carbon Life写一篇英语短文，要求涵盖以下要点：

1. 不需要用电和水的时候，记得把它们关掉。

2. 外出时，尽可能步行、骑自行车或乘坐公共交通工具。

3. 请使用节能产品。

字数：100-110

                                                                              

 

Answer 1

【答案】

In recent years, the attention to global warming has been increasing. More and more people make contributions to prevent it from going worse. At the same time, a new low-carbon lifestyle emerges.

What can we do to achieve low carbon? First, remember to turn off lights and water taps when you do not use them. Second, when going out, take public transports, ride a bike or walk as much as possible to reduce carbon emission. Third, use the energy-saving products.

Besides of these, there are many other ways we can employ to live a low carbon life. If everyone maintains/ adheres to the lifestyle, it will make a huge change to the current situation and our home will become much more beautiful.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。