假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:(1)每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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12．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
In the summer holiday，we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there．It's a long and bored journey．But the moment I arrived，I fall in love with the city．It's such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it．The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue．If you walk along the coast，you can feel the wind to blowing on your face．The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship．You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted．Moreover，I think the driver there drive too fast in the street．You can never be too carefully when crossing the street．

分析本文主要讲述了作者在暑假的时候，到青岛去旅游以及顺便去那里看望叔叔时的感受；作者在极力赞美青岛的同时，还提到了由于在青岛司机将车开得太快，所以过马路时一定得当心！

解答 In the summer holiday，we travelled to Qingdao and paid∧visit
to my uncle there．It's a long and bored journey．But the moment
I arrived，I fall in love with the city．It's such beautiful a city that
I can hardly find any word to describe it．The streets are cleaning and
the sky is blue．If you walk along the coast，you can feel the wind to
blowing on your face．The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a
boat or a ship．You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted．
Moreover，I think the driver there drive  fast in the street．You can
never be too carefully when crossing the street．

详解：
1．在pay之后加a   考查固定短语     pay a visit to sb．意为：拜访某人；故在pay之后加a．
2．bored改为boring     考查现在分词   此处在句中作定语，修饰名词 journey，由于动词bore与该名词构成主谓关系；故用boring．
3．fall改为fell    考查时态   结合上文可知，此处表示暑假时作者刚到达青岛时的感受，指的是过去的情况；故用fell．
4．such改为so   考查副词   such是形容词，通常用来修饰名词，副词so修饰形容词或副词；此处用来修饰形容词beautiful，故用so．
5．cleaning改为clean   考查形容词   此处在句中作表语，说明主语The streets 的情况；故用形容词clean．
6．去掉to   考查感官动词    本句的意思是：如果你沿着海岸走，你可以感觉到有风吹在你的脸上；此处表示当时正在进行的动作，应使用现在分词；故去掉to．
7．far改为long    考查句意理解以及固定短语   as far as意为：远到…，直到…为止； as long as"只要"；此处的意思是：只要得到允许，你还可以钓鱼；故用long．
8．Moreover改为However   考查副词词义辨析   moreover 意为：而且，此外；however意为：然而；承接上一句可知，此处描述的是另一方面的问题，表示的是转折，意为：然而，我认为司机在街上将车开得太快了；故用However．
9．driver改为drivers 考查名词的单复数    此处指的是街上的（一些）司机；故用复数名词drivers．
10．carefully改为careful   考查形容词   此处用在系动词be之后，用来说明的是主语的情况，故用形容词careful

点评短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．

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