分析 本篇书面表达属于说明文,根据提示信息来介绍如何遵纪守礼.写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态. 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构.比如waiting in line on many occasions and so on.是非谓语短语做状语.only when we all behave well,can our society be harmonious.使用了倒装句.此外,文章还使用了大量短语in my opinion,such as,last but not least,as far as I am concerned等.以及副词besides的使用使文章内容更具有层次感,也使语言更加连贯.
解答 Recently,there has been a heated discussion online about a female driver in Chengdu,who was violently beaten because of her rude driving. In my opinion,both beating others and impolite driving are quite bad behaviors.
China is a civilized country with a long history.(高分句型)Our ancestors attached great importance to"Li"-civilized behavior.Every Chinese should obey discipline and behave well.
As middle school students,we should be strict with ourselves.(高分句型)Firstly,we ought to respect the old and take care of children.Besides,we should behave ourselves,such as dining in good manners,waiting in line on many occasions and so on.(高分句型)Last but not least,we must obey school and society discipline,not cheating in exams.
As far as I am concerned,only when we all behave well,can our society be harmonious.(高分句型)
点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯,比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词,使文章流畅、通顺,并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感.(1)认真审题,确定体裁. (2)构思要点.根据题目要求,理解要表达的要点.设计好文章的层次段落,考虑所用时态、人称等,把要点串联起来,构成文章框架.(3)选词造句,避难选易.(4)认真检查,避免错误.仔细阅读全文,查找是否有错,注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误,句式是否正确.逻辑是否一致.
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