Question

【题目】假设你是新华中学的李华，请你给来校访函，请他参加你们学校举行的英语诗书会活动包括：

1. 发出邀请；

2. 介绍诗书活动的相关信息（例如：

3. 说明邀请的原因并询问对方的意向

注意：1. 词数100左右。

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr. Li ,

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Li,

I hope everything goes on well with you. I’m writing to invite you to join us in the English reading circle to be held in our school. We’ll feel greatly honored if you are present.

The activity is scheduled at 8:00am this Friday in the auditorium. Aiming to improve the students’ understanding of the beauty of English literature, the reading circle will serve as a platform for students to communicate with each other face to face, sharing their own reading experience together.

As we consider that you can give us some professional introductions to English literature and some valuable suggestions on English reading, we sincerely hope that you can come and join us.

Would you be kind enough to spare some time for us? Thank you in advance. Hope to hear from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求假设你是新华中学的李华，写一封邀请函。要注意邀请函的格式和特殊用词。未来的事情，用一般将来时来写。要点：1. 发出邀请；2. 介绍诗书活动的相关信息。3. 说明邀请的原因并询问对方的意向。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事，face to face面对面。还使用了宾语从句I hope everything goes on well with you.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。