Question

2．假期即将到来，同学们在口语课上讨论假期计划，提出了不同的看法．请根据提示写一篇有关讨论内容的短文，并谈谈你的假期打算．
优点缺点
待在家中舒适，能好好休息，和亲人、同学相聚失去开阔眼界的机会
外出旅游有机会和不同的人交流，丰富自己的经验花费多，旅途不便
注意：1．词数100左右
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3．参考词汇 开阔  broaden    眼界 horizon．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们就同学们在口语课上讨论得假期计划，谈谈自己的假期打算，写一篇作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第已人称，时态主要是一般将来时，内容要点包括：待在家中和外出旅游的优点和缺点．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为待在家中的优点和缺点．第二部分为外出旅游的优点和缺点．第三部分为作者的假期打算．
重点短语与句型：
in favor of 支持，赞成
get together 聚会
prefer to do sth 更愿意做某事
高分句型一：They think meeting different people will increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons．此句They think后 宾语从句用了动名词作主语
高分句型二：In my opinion，it would be better to stay at home，for I can do whatever I like and help my parents with the housework此句whatever"无论什么"引导宾语从句

解答 The winter holiday is coming．Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday．Some are in favor of staying at home．After a tiring term，they believe it a convenient and comfortable way to relax．Besides，it's traditional for them to get together with friends and relatives during the Spring Festival．But they will lose the chance of getting experience of the outside world．（待在家中的优点和缺点）
Others prefer to go out for traveling．They think meeting different people will increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons（高分句型一）．However，it will surely take a lot of money and the trips may cause some inconvenience as well．（外出旅游的优点和缺点）
In my opinion，it would be better to stay at home，for I can do whatever I like and help my parents with the housework（高分句型二）．（作者的假期打算）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．