Question

某英语报社开辟了中学生习作专栏。本期的话题是：注重外貌日常学习、工作和生活中的细节。因为细节往往决定成败。请你以“we should pay much attention to details”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的一些看法。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文中不能出现本人相关信息。

Answer 1

Should Pay Much Attention to Details
Some people may think that one who wants to achieve great success shouldn’t pay much attention to details. But sometimes it is the details that determine our success，for they may be the very thing that has a great impact on what we’re doing. Since we have realized the importance of details，what should we do? First， we should form the habit of being careful，because a careful person will rarely overlook details. What’s more，we should learn to keep t he balance of quantity and quality. We may find that when faced with lots of work，the faster we do it，the more mistakes we will make. Why? Because when we work at high speed，the only thing we care about is quantity in which case we are more likely to neglect the details.
As far as I’m concerned，we should keep it in mind that quality comes first，without which quantity is of no significance.

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】范文有些常用的词组：form the habit of养成…习惯，keep t he balance of 保持平衡吗，As far as I’m concerned据我所知，of no significance.不重要，还有范文还有很多好的句型：Some people may think that one who wants to achieve great success shouldn’t pay much attention to details.这句话用了定语从句，But sometimes it is the details that determine our success，for they may be the very thing that has a great impact on what we’re doing.这句话用了it做形式主语和宾语从句， We may find that when faced with lots of work，这句话用了状语从句的省略，the faster we do it，the more mistakes we will make.这句话用了固定句型， Because when we work at high speed，the only thing we care about is quantity in which case we are more likely to neglect the details. 这句话用了定语从句，还有文章还使用了First，What’s more，这样的关联词，使文章更加连贯。