Question

【题目】假如你是李华，将向你的外国朋友Tom介绍你所在城市的休闲广场的情况。要点包括：

1. 积极作用；

2. 利用情况；

3. 展望。

注意：1. 词数100字左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：休闲广场leisure square

Dear Tom,

How is everything going!

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All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

How’s everything going? I’d like to tell you something about the leisure squares in my city. The citizens benefit a lot from them. On one hand, squares could help people keep fit by doing physical exercises. On the other hand, it is a safe place for emergency.

People are making use of leisure squares in various ways. In the daytime, people tend to do morning exercises in the nearby leisure square. In the evening, kids could have fun with their parents there.

I do believe the leisure square will be not only a gathering place but also a symbol of the city’s culture in the near future.

I hope you can have a chance to visit the leisure squares in my city.

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，向外国朋友介绍你所在城市的休闲广场的情况。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 广场情况介绍

1）积极作用

2）利用情况

3）展望

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

leisure square；benefit；exercise；make use of；have fun；have a relax；in the future；have a chance to

第三步：连词成句

1. I’m writing to tell you about leisure squares in my city.

2. They are really beneficial to us citizens.

3. In the morning, we tend to do exercises in the nearby leisure square.

4. In the evening, the families could have fun altogether there.

5. I do believe the leisure square will develop even better in the future.

6. Hope you can come to visit the leisure squares in my city one day.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改