Question

在下面的短文中只有10处错误，请找出，多出的（从第11处起）不给分。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词

删除：把多余词用（﹨）划掉

修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下写出修改后的词

Half a year before I went abroad for further study． I received a lot of present．All were wrapped in color paper．Among them were two presents which were really interested me．My sister buy me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different countries in them．My brother gave me a note, which read, “My present has put in your bedroom.” While I  hurried into my bedroom, I found a box in it．Open  the box, I got a pocket computer．I was very glad．I understood these two presents would help me using body language to communicate people and improve my English．      

Answer 1

before 改为ago    present 改为 presents     were 去掉

buy改为bought    them改为it   加been    While改为When

Open改为Opening    using 改为use     communicate后加with