Question

【题目】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

Growing up on a small farm, I lived a life that I took for granted. My father worked in the city as a plumber(水暖工).He was not highly educated, but he was smart, looking at problems in an engineer’s way. He was a man made of leather, brass and chewing tobacco who tried to teach my brother and me useful things, including respect. He also had a temper and was strict with us for he would scold us when we made some careless mistakes. Sometimes, my father seemed like a distant enemy to me and I didn’t like him very much.

One day I came home from primary school and his car was already there. Once inside, I was told by my mother that he didn’t feel well. His back hurt. My father never missed work; in fact, when he came home, he went to the barn to work even more. I remember looking at him secretly around the corner as he lay on his bed in the middle of the day.

Later, my mother told me he got multiple myeloma(多发性骨髓瘤),a type of cancer. As the cancer grows, the person will shrink because the disease destroys the body’s energy and the abnormal antibodies cause problems for other cells and tissue. Bones eventually look like Swiss cheese, and when they break, they may never heal. But I didn’t realize that my father’s time was rather limited and just treated him the same way I used to.

For the last year of my fathers life, his entire day consisted df rising from his hospital bed in the living room and walking to his chair to sit and think. He was predictably in that chair when I came home one day during the ninth grade. I do not remember where my mother and brother were, but the two of us were alone.

Paragraph 1 :

He asked me to sit down and what he told me still moves me these decades Later.

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Paragraph 2 :

At that moment, I realized that he was doing more than telling.

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1 :

He asked me tosit down and what he told me still moves me these decades later. Lying on the hospital bed, he told me about his life on the farm, his family, his loves, and his heartbreaks. Although he was tortured by the cancer, his inner self rushed out to me in a great flood as if a pipe had burst all of a sudden. He had been speaking for maybe an hour or more and mentioned that he actually felt regretful about being so strict with us.

Paragraph 2 :

At that moment,I realized that he was doing more than telling. He was asking to be forgiven. All it took was to understand that was what he needed, and I forgave everything, immediately. The thought of my father being an enemy disappeared, with tears rolling down on my face. I held my father's hands tightly, enjoying this deep but quiet love. Although he has gone for a long time, I still always remember that moment and the realization that I love him.

【解析】

本篇书面表达是读后续写。

通过阅读所给文章可知，作者在一个小农场长大，他的父亲整天忙于工作和农活。父亲对作者和弟弟一直比较严格，因此有时作者感觉父亲对他来说就像一个远处的敌人。这种情况直到父亲身患癌症也没有发生改变，直到有一天父亲把作者叫到病床前，和作者敞开了心扉。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：他让我坐下来，说了一些几十年后仍让我感动的话。可知，接下来第一段续写的内容应该是父亲和作者说话的具体内容，应该是与他生活息息相关的内容，也会有对孩子的些许愧疚等。第一段开头是：在那一刻，我才意识到父爱无言。可知，第二段应该侧重讲了作者对自己与父亲之间关系的感悟或对父亲离去的不舍等内容。