Question

2．2月26日，学校在大礼堂为高三学生举行誓师大会，以鼓励高三同学继续拼搏，取得理想的成绩．请写一篇短文张贴在你校墙报的英语专栏．
内容包括：
1．听取专家报告；
2．师生代表发言；
3．你的感受．
要求：
1．不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节，使文章连贯；
2．字数在120-150之间
提示：誓师大会oath-taking rally．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
We paid attention to the expert's reports，which helps and improves our study and life．
我们认真的听了专家所作的报告，那报告对我们很有帮助能够提高我们的学习和生活．
高分句型二：
For the coming days，we will seize the time and spare no efforts to study in order to achieve high scores in the exam to return our parents and teachers．
在以后的日子里，为了能够在高考中取得好成绩来回报父母和老师，我们将会抓住机会努力的学习．
句型一 which helps and improves our study and life 该句是一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中充当主语，替代前面的先行词report
句型二 we will seize the time and spare no efforts to study in order to achieve high scores…该句的谓语部分使用了一个重要的短语：①spare no efforts to do sth 尽最大努力做某事 
                                     ②in order to achieve high scores 此处为不定式谓语位于句尾作目的状语．

解答 It's February 26th，we've hold a swearing in ceremony in school's great hall for the senior students in our high school．The cerenony's purpose is to encourage us work hard and strike for the last exams．We paid attention to the expert's reports，which helps and improves our study and life．（高分句型一）Two representatives of teachers delivered their speeches to inspire our confidence．For the coming days，we will seize the time and spare no efforts to study in order to achieve high scores in the exam to return our parents and teachers．（高分句型二）

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文规定了考生的写作思路，考生在写作时应将所提要点与主题紧密结合在一起，运用合适的词汇和短语、准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文表达清楚．