Question

【题目】如今，生活在大都市有许多优势，同时也有不少烦恼。请根据以下提示，写一篇短文，介绍城市生活的利与弊，并表明你的态度（是否喜欢城市生活）文章开头已给出。

注意：1. 字数100字左右；

2. 开头已经给出；

3. 请在答题纸框内作答。

利	弊
方便购物	花销大、住房昂贵
交通便利	空气污浊
休闲、娱乐形式多样	公交车拥挤

Nowadays living in big cities has both advantages and disadvantages.

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays living in big cities has both advantages and disadvantages.

There are a lot of good points living in big cities. First, it is easy for people to go shopping since most big cities have shopping centers. Convenient transportation is another reason for people to love city life. Buses, subways and taxis can take you anywhere you want. Besides, with all kinds of entertainment, one can never feel bored.

However, not all things are statisying. The biggest problem is the high expenses. Accommodation in big cities is so expensive that one can hardly afford it. Furthermore, the air in big cities is not so fresh as that in the counytryside. As for the transportation, it is often very crowded in public transport, especially in rush hours.

In spite of the disadvantages, I still love the life in big cities because it is full of excitement, which is appealing to young people.

【解析】试题分析本文属于话题类写作，话题是城市生活的利与弊，要点以表格的形式给出。根据要求文章可分四段来写：第一段引入话题；第二段介绍城市生活的好处；第三段介绍城市生活的坏处；第四段总结全文，表明自己的观点。写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时注意要把所提示的点写全，不要遗漏要点；语句要通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：一定要注意给出自己对城市生活的看法。

【亮点说明】There are a lot of good points living in big cities现在分词作后置定语；it is easy for people to go shopping since most big cities have shopping centers. Since引导原因状语从句；Buses,subways and taxis can take you anywhere you want.句中使用定语从句；However, not all things are statisfying.句中运用了部分否定；Accommodation in big cities is so expensive that one can hardly afford it.结果状语从句用于句中；I still love the life in big cities because it is full of excitement, which is appealing to young people.原因状语从句和非限制性定语从句完美结合；另外，However, Furthermore, As for the transportation, In spite of the disadvantages,的运用为文章增色添彩。