Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友David对中国传统文化很感兴趣，他想让你给他推荐一本关于这方面的书。请 你给他回一封邮件,向他推荐我国的四大名著之---《西游记》。内容包括：

1.《西游记》简介；

2.推荐理由。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：徒弟 disciple,佛经 Buddhist scriptures

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear David,

I’m glad you’re interested in our traditional culture. I recommend Journey to the West first to you,

It tells the story of Tang Xuanzang and his three disciples who go to India for Buddhist scriptures. During their journey, they bravely face a series of dangers and finally conquer those devils and monsters. This book is not only interesting in content and vivid in language, but also conveys a spirit of courage. In our daily life, we are bound to meet with all kinds of challenges. We should be brave and never give up.

The book is well worth reading. I hope you will like it.

Your sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，,向英国笔友David推荐我国的四大名著之---《西游记》。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

要求：

1.《西游记》简介；

2.推荐理由。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

recommend；Journey to the West；disciple；face；a series of；conquer；convey；be bound to；challenge；be well worth doing

第三步：连词成句

1.I recommend Journey to the West first to you,

2. It tells the story of Tang Xuanzang and his three disciples

3. They bravely face a series of dangers and finally conquer those devils and monsters.

4.It conveys a spirit of courage.

5.In our daily life, we are bound to meet with all kinds of challenges.

6. We should be brave and never give up.

7. The book is well worth reading.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…, on the other hand…, Some…,while others…, as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用定语从句：who go to India for Buddhist scriptures.和由not only…but also…连接的并列句：This book is not only interesting in content and vivid in language, but also conveys a spirit of courage.还使用了一些固定词组，如a series of；be bound to和be well worth reading等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。