Question

下面这幅漫画展现了人生的一个道理，请根据你对这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文．

你的短文应包含以下内容：

1.描述图片内容，如图中人物的行为和心情等：

2.揭示图画所要表达的人生哲理；

3.结合自身实际，谈谈这一漫画给你的启示。

注意：

1.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数．

2.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

3.参考词汇：挖土cut earth  钻石 diamond

Many people fail in life because they do not realize how close they are to success when they give up. In this picture, we can see ____________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Never Give up

Many people fail in life because they do not realize how close they are to success when they give up. In this picture, we can see a man is cutting earth in a tunnel, hoping to find some diamonds. He makes great efforts in his work. However, after a long time of pains without gains, he decides to give up, feeling disappointed and depressed. But in fact he is very close to success when he gives up. With one or two more attempts of cutting, he would have seen those diamonds right in front of him.

This story tells us a very simple but important piece of truth: we should be confident in what we have chosen to do and never stop our effort until we succeed.

As a student preparing for the entrance examinations, I should learn a lesson from the man. Just like the diamonds in the picture, success is just waiting for my last efforts. I have been cutting earth for so many years, so I will never give up before I succeed.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇看图写话。体裁属于议论类。看图写话是能力要求较高的书面表达。它能较好的测试学生的能力水平。看图本身就是一种能力。英语就成了表达能力的工具。议论类看图写话应注意：1.对图画进行简单的描述；2.阐述文章所蕴含的哲理；3.发表自己的看法和态度。成文时：时态：一般现在时；人称：第三人称为主，发表看法的时候，用第一人称。使用高级词汇、句型和短语。适当使用连词和插入语使文章自然，流畅。

【亮点说明】使用了高级句型从句：Many people fail in life because they do not realize how close they are to success when they give up； in fact he is very close to success when he gives up； we should be confident in what we have chosen to do and never stop our effort until we succeed.；I have been cutting earth for so many years, so I will never give up before I succeed.

使用了分词短语：hoping to find some diamonds.；feeling disappointed and depressed.；With one or two more attempts of cutting,

使用了短语：give up；fail in；makes great efforts in；

考点：考察看图作文