Question

【题目】王明是红星中学高一年级的学生。进入高中后，不知怎样适应高中生活。请你以他好友的身份给他写一封建议信。

内容包括以下要点：

1.多与老师沟通交流；

2.积极参与班级活动，尽快融入集体中；

3.与志趣相投的同学交朋友；

4………….

要求：1.词数80~100次；

2.可适当发挥；

3.书写要规范。

Dear Wang Ming,

I’m sorry you are having trouble with your high school life.

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I hope you will find my advice useful.

Yours,

Zhang Jian

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Wang Ming,

I’m sorry you are having trouble with your high school life.Firstly, the senior school life is different from the juniorschool life．Generally speaking, the teachers m senior school tend to adopt different teaching methods and they pay more attention to theability training . Therefore,my suggestion is that you should adjust totheir methods．Secondly, as senior students you are supposed toexplore your own learning methods, for effective learning methods aremole important．If you know how to learn you will make full use of yourspare time and make greater progress．

I hope you will find my advice useful.

Yours,

Zhang Jian

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求用英语写一封建议信。要注意书信的格式和特殊用词。考虑用用一般现在时来写。要点：1.多与老师沟通交流；2.积极参与班级活动，尽快融入集体中；3.与志趣相投的同学交朋友……这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: be different from与……不同，Generally speaking一般而言。还使用了表语从句Therefore,my suggestion is that you should adjust totheir methods．和条件状语从句If you know how to learn you will make full use of yourspare time and make greater progress．等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。