Question

【题目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假如你们学校近期将开设“学生理财入门”(Money Management ABC) 选修课，你会参加吗？请做出选择并简要说说你的理由。

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Answer 1

【答案】As is known to all ,this modern society is also a commercial society. Therefore, in my view, in schools, it is not only useful but also necessary to teach the students some knowledge of money management. It is wise for us to attend such kind of optional courses. My reasons are as follows.

To begin with , it is widely acknowledged that schooling equips us for the future. A knowledge of money management will equip us to enter the society. In addition, the ability to manage money is essential for managing our future life. With a good knowledge of money management, you will have a better understanding of the significance of money. You will deal with the problems in job-hunting and living in a wiser way. Otherwise, you will find it difficult to adapt to the future social life.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于议论文, 要求关于是否参加“学生理财入门”选修课说明理由。

第一步：

审题：议论文 说明是否会参加“学生理财入门”选修课及其理由

人称：第二、三人称

时态：一般现在时、一般将来时

结构： 分两部分，第一部分说明你会参加“学生理财入门”选修课，第二部分说明理由。

要点：

1. 说明你会参加“学生理财入门”选修课：学校有必要开设“学生理财入门”选修课，学生应该参加选修课学习

2．说明理由

①学习理财知识会为将来步入社会做准备，理财知识会让你更懂得金钱的意义

②理财能力是必需的，有助于将来管理自己的生活

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）

a commercial society；useful；necessary；attend；optional courses；equip sb. for…；the ability to do…；be essential for…；have a better understanding of；significance；deal with；in a wiser way；adapt to

第三步：连词成句

(1)This modern society is also a commercial society.

(2) It is not only useful but also necessary to teach the students some knowledge of money management.

(3) It is wise for the students to attend such kind of optional courses.

(4) Schooling equips us for the future.

(5) A knowledge of money management will equip us to enter the society.

(6) The ability to manage money is essential for managing our future life.

(7) You will have a better understanding of the significance of money.

(8)You will deal with the problems in job-hunting and living in a wiser way.

(9) You will find it difficult to adapt to future social life.

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)

表示时间顺序： first of all; to begin/start with , in the beginning

firstly.... secondly .... lastly / finally/in the end

表示并列或补充关系： what is more; besides, moreover, apart from;

in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others

表示转折对比关系：but, however, although, though, yet, while

on one hand…on the other hand ...,

表示因果关系：because, as, therefore, as a result, as a consequence, consequently, thus

连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、

段与段之间结构清晰。