Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你班外教Ms. Cindy任教期满即将回国。作为班长，你将代表班级 在告别会上发言致谢,并赠送带有中国文化特色的礼物。内容包括：

1. 感激之情；

2. 礼物寓意；

3. 美好祝愿。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Hi, everybody

On this special occasion, I feel much honored to represent the class to express our sincere gratitude to Ms. Cindy for her excellent work.

Thanks to Ms. Cindy’s generous help as well as her great devotion and efforts, we’ve become more interested and done better in English, which will be of great importance to our further study. Ms. Cindy, here’s a pen container, a souvenir that we’ve specially prepared for you. Hopefully you’ll like it. This pen container is made of bamboo, which is evergreen and hollow inside and in Chinese culture it’s a symbol of being young and modest. What makes it special is that we’ve all signed on it, making it a good reminder of the happy time we spent together. Now, I’d also like to wish you a pleasant journey home!

Thank you very much!

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇致谢演讲，表达对Ms. Cindy的感激和祝愿。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

要求：

1.表达感谢之情

2.赠送礼物

1）介绍礼物

2）礼物的特殊之处以及其表达的寓意

3.表达美好祝愿

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

be honored to; express sincere gratitude; thanks to; of great importance; be made of; a symbol of; a good reminder of

第三步：连词成句

1. I feel much honored to represent the class to express our sincere gratitude to Ms. Cindy for her excellent work.

2. Thanks to Ms. Cindy’s generous help as well as her great devotion and efforts, we’ve become more interested and done better in English.

3. we’ ve become more interested and done better in English, which will be of great importance to our further study.

4. This pen container is made of bamboo.

5. In Chinese culture it’s a symbol of being young and modest.

6. What makes it special is that we’ve all signed on it, making it a good reminder of the happy time we spent together.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second, And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also)…, including

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,on the other hand…, Some…, while others…, as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改