Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之问交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。（请将答案写在答题纸上）

As far as I can remember, grow up in Ohio left many good memories and very few bad ones. We rented a home near a lake where I spent good time of my life. I attended to school to learn a variety of course, and went camping overnight in the woods. My dog and I would go fishing in the lake that I mentioned early. During the winter we will come down at night and go ice-skating on the lake. In Ohio the snow could be heavily sometimes and too deep to walk in as I was not that tall at the time. It was not until I was sixteen and moved to California when the life was changed. This was a tough change for me because the area total differed from Ohio. There was no rivers or lakes to fish in at all.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】grow—growing 动名词短语作主语，故把grow—growing。

【2】good前加a 句意：度过我一生中的一段美好时光。故在good前加a。

【3】把attended后面的to去掉或把attended改为went 固定搭配attend school/go to school去上学，故把attended后面的to去掉或把attended改为went。

【4】course—courses 句意：各种各样的课程，故把course—courses。

【5】early—earlier 句意：我更早提到的，所以用比较级，故把early—earlier。

【6】will—would 文章在回忆过去美好的时光，所以要用过去时态，故把will—would 。

【7】heavily—heavy be动词后面用形容词作表语，故把heavily—heavy。

【8】when—that 此处是强调句型，故把when—that。

【9】total—totally 副词修饰动词，此处应用副词故把total—totally。

【10】was—were 这是一个there be句型，句子的主语是复数形式，故把was—were。