Question

假如你是李红，新转入一所学校。请你根据下面表中的提示语写一则日记，叙述这几个星期以来新老师和同学对你各方面的关心、帮助以及你的感受和愿望。

生活方面	同学们从家中带来当地可口的食物给我吃。 同学们带我参观校园，周末邀请我到他们家做客。 下午放学后，同学们经常带我去操场跑步、打排球。
思想方面	老师、同学们找我谈心，和我交朋友。
学习方面	老师、同学在学业上帮助我
感受和愿望

注意：1.词数：不少于60词（日记开头已给出的内容不计入总词数）；

2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；

3. 条理清楚、语句连贯；

4.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。

6th June

My teacher and classmates have helped me a lot since I came here. _________________________________________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

They brought me local foods from their homes. They were very delicious. My classmates showed me around our school. They even invited me to their homes to watch TV and enjoy dinners. After school they often ran and played volleyball with me in the playground. They came to talk with me when we were free. We have been good friends. They helped me with my lessons. When I had problems, I went to them for help. I feel very happy here. I hope to make more friends and make progress in my studies.

【解析】

试题分析：这里日记的开头已经给出，因为日记是记录已经发生的事。所以通常都用一般过去式，但是，考生应该注意的是，如果你的日记是描写风景等等的，是不用过去式的，要用一般现在时，也可以用一般将来式。内容要点要全面，上下段要使用连接词做到连贯。

考点：提纲作文。

点评：为了避免太多单词拼写错误，语法错误，不要为了追求词语的华丽而堆积一些自己也没把握的单词，不要刻意追求长句而写一些自己不知对错的有多个从句组成的长句。考试时最好选择自己最有把握的词汇，短语，句式。