Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Smith想让女儿来中国学习汉语，给你发来邮件咨询哪所学校更好，请根据提示给他回一封邮件：

1．推荐光明语言学校(Guangming Language School)；

2．该校有10多年招收全世界各国学生的历史，汉语教学经验丰富；

3．招收不同教育程度的学生；

4．课程(curriculum)丰富，讲课灵活，生动，有趣。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2．可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

Dear Smith，

I’m_glad_to_hear_that_your_daughter_will_come_here_to_learn_Chinese.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Smith,

I m glad to hear that your daughter wi11 come here to learn Chinese. I d like to recommend Guangming Language Schoo1.

The language schoo1 has more than 10 years of experience in teaching foreign students. The students come from a11 over the wor1d, with different educationa1 1eve1s and background. What s more, the curriculum is rich. Students can learn various courses 1ike spoken Chinese and Chinese cu1 ture. What impresses me most is that the teachers have developed a special teaching method, which can make their classes living and interesting. Most of the fore ign students can speak f1uent Chinese when they I leave schoo1.

I hope you can take my suggest ion into consideration. If you want to know any thing else, don t hesitate to contact me.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，你的英国朋友Smith想让女儿来中国学习汉语，给你发来邮件咨询哪所学校更好，请根据提示给他回一封邮件。全文以一般现在时和第三人称为主。

第1步：审题。根据提示可知本文是一封电子邮件，介绍 光明语言学校。全文以一般现在时和第三人称为主。

第2步：组织要点。推荐光明语言学校(Guangming Language School)；该校有10多年招收全世界各国学生的历史，汉语教学经验丰富；招收不同教育程度的学生；课程(curriculum)丰富，讲课灵活，生动，有趣。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化，并不死板。尽量运用了高级的语法结构，如定语从句…, which can make their classes living and interesting.名词性从句What impresses me most is that the teachers have developed a special teaching method…这些高级语法结构的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了很强的驾驭语言的能力。