Question

英语之角组织一次户外活动，假如你是负责人，用英语写一份通知，要点如下：
●活动目的：练习英语口语
●活动地点：市政府广场 (City Square)
●活动时间：2011年4月30日
●参加对象：英语之角成员
●活动形式：骑自行车，放风筝等
注意：1. 格式已给出。
2. 词数100左右；
3. 可适当增加内容，以使行文连贯。
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Thank you.

Answer 1

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We will organize an outing for the members of the English Corner. We are going to assemble at City Square. It will take place on April 30, 2011. The outing is intended to help us speak English in a relaxing way. At the same time, we can get refreshed and feel more energetic. Every member will be welcome to the trip, and varieties of activities can be included such as cycling, flying kites, taking photos, and so on. Please take an active part and we will definitely benefit from it. Please feel free to contact us for details if necessary.
Thank you.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。