Question

【题目】请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

请认真阅读下面有关我国共享汽车情况的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

Numbers of Shared Cars in China and Tendency

Car-sharing is catching on

Car-sharing is a new concept. Previously, car ownership helped to develop China’s economy and its cities. But now people have found that it has led to traffic jams and other challenges to the environment and economy. Conversely, car sharing serves as a model to provide car access without the requirement of ownership.

Unlike traditional car-rentals over the counter, car-sharing refers to services where users can gain access to vehicles, often by the hour, online. The cars are usually parked at designated parking lots, where drivers can get to and return them. More than 40 companies in China currently offer car-sharing services, while most cars are new energy vehicles.

China’s Ministry of Transport has recently voiced its support for the development of the car-sharing industry.

【写作内容】

1. 用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；

2. 谈谈推广共享汽车的益处（上述文字仅供参考）；

3. 就如何促进共享汽车的健康发展提两条建议。

【写作要求】

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 不必写标题。

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当

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Answer 1

【答案】As we can see from the diagram, in 2016,China only possessed 28,000 shared cars. It is predicted that the number will continue to rise and by 2020, as many as 300,000 such cars will be put onto the market.

Accelerating the development of car-sharing industry does have its own advantages. Not only does it provide an alternative for people to get around but it will also help to shrink the ever increasing scale of private cars. Thus, car-sharing service does its part to ease urban traffic and reduce air pollution.

As to how to achieve a sustainable development for car-sharing service, here are some suggestions. On the one hand, the government should strengthen its guidance and monitoring. On the other hand, enterprises themselves should improve their online and offline service abilities, such as ensuring the safety of customers’ private information and building more parking lots and charging posts.

【解析】试题分析：本书面表达是一篇图表写作。本书面表达的要求考生首先用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容，然后再给出自己的评判。认真阅读有关我国共享汽车情况的柱状图及相关文字，谈谈推广共享汽车的益处，并就如何促进共享汽车的健康发展提两条建议。

首先，概括部分考查了学生的概括能力，学生再概括的时候要注意语言的精炼性，要点要齐全。其次，阐述的理由或论据要简洁明了，层次分明。最后， 对自己的观点要作出总结。

【亮点说明】

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