Question

20．书面表达假如你叫李华，你的朋友Jenny来信向你询问如何保持健康．请你给他发一封e-mail提些建议．内容要点如下：
1．注意合理饮食，多吃水果蔬菜；
2．保证充足睡眠，至少8小时；
3．坚持锻炼身体，多参加体育运动．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Jenny，
                                 
Yours LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 【亮点说明】How nice to hear from you!感叹句位于句子开头；In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy．疑问词加动词不定式运用巧妙；Since we grow very fast，we are in  need of nutritious food，such as fresh vegetables，fruits，fish，meat and so on．Since引导原因状语从句，在此表示一种客观事实；I think you'd better not eat food with much sugar and fat．宾语从句出现在句中；And you should get plenty of sleep，which is necessary for you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day．非限制性定语从句和动词不定式完美结合；Only in this way can you keep fit．部分倒装把文章推向了高潮；另外，However，In addition，的点缀，为文章增色添彩．

解答 Dear Jenny，
     How nice to hear from you!In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy．I would like to give you some advice．
     As we know，food is of great important to us teenagers．Since we grow very fast，we are in  need of nutritious food，such as fresh vegetables，fruits，fish，meat and so on．（高分句型一） However，I think you'd better not eat food with much sugar and fat．And you should get plenty of sleep，which is necessary for you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day．（高分句型二） In addition，you should take physical exercise regularly．It will be beneficial to your health．Only in this way can you keep fit．（高分句型三）
      Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．