Question

【题目】假如你是李华，最近你所居住的社区居委会为了推广社区文化，号召居民邀请自己的亲朋好友来社区参观交流。你准备给在本市上学的英国朋友George写封信，向他介绍你的社区并邀请他本周日前来参观。

要点如下：

1.社区位于城市中心，环境优美，居民守礼，在这里生活便利又舒适。

2.社区背靠青山，远望大海5自然景色十分吸引人。

3.近年来经济发展迅速，社区面貌焕然一新，居民安居乐业。

注意：字数不少于100字，可适当增加细节。

词汇：推广 promote;便利 convenient

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear George,

Recently, aiming to promote the culture of my neighborhood, the neighborhood committee calls on us residents to invite our family and friends to visit here and exchange ideas. I’m writing to sincerely invite you, my close friend, to come to my neighborhood and have a great time with me this Sunday.

In the downtown area of the city is located my neighborhood with gorgeous surroundings and polite people, where life is quite convenient and comfortable. When you come here, what will attract you most, I believe, is supposed to be the beautiful natural scenery — the green mountains behind and the blue sea in front, offering a fascinating view to every resident. In the past few years, with the rapid economic development, my neighborhood has taken on a totally new look. Everybody here works hard and enjoys a prosperous life.

My dear friend, I am looking forward to your coming and can’t wait to share an amazing day with you in my neighborhood.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】写作背景：最近李华居住的社区居委会为了推广社区文化，号召居民邀请自己的亲朋好友来社区参观交流。你准备给在本市上学的英国朋友George写封信，向他介绍你的社区并邀请他本周日前来参观。因为是向朋友介绍，所以以一般现在时为主，用第三人称和第一人称来写。文章分为三部分：先说明写信目的，邀请好朋友本周日来社区参观交流。然后主要介绍自己的社区：1.社区位于城市中心，环境优美，居民守礼，在这里生活便利又舒适。2.社区背靠青山，远望大海5自然景色十分吸引人。3.近年来经济发展迅速，社区面貌焕然一新，居民安居乐业。最后表达愿望，希望朋友到来。

写作时要注意条理清楚，结构严谨，要点全面，观点明确。还要注意力求使用高级词汇和句型来增加文章亮点，如非谓语动词aiming to promote the culture，offering a fascinating view的运用，不定式to come to my neighborhood表目的，倒装句In the downtown area of the city is located my neighborhood.定语从句where life is quite convenient and comfortable.主语从句what will attract you most.词语calls on, with gorgeous surroundings and polite people,

be supposed to, with the rapid economic development, take on, looking forward to等。