Question

【题目】假如你是校学生会主席李华，你校要举办一次（Hanfu）表演。请你写一封电子邮件邀请在你市做交换生的英国好友Chris观看演出。内容包括：

1．发出邀请；

2．演出时间，地点和目的；

3．建议他上网搜索，简要了解汉服。

注意：1.词数100 左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr. Chris,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Chris,

I am Li Hua ,chairman of the Students Union. Knowing that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture , I am more than delighted to invite you to enjoy a show which will be hosted by our school. The details about it are as follows.

In order to enrich our school life and promote traditional Chinese culture, a Hanfu performance will be held at 9:00 a.m. next Saturday in the hall of our school . It will be a great show played by senior two students dressed in Hanfu. There is no doubt that it will be a visual feast. Therefore, would you please be so kind as to surf the Internet for the introduction of Hanfu ,which will be helpful to appreciate the show?

I’d appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生写信邀请好友参观本校的Hanfu表演，并告诉他一些相关事项。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般将来时

结构：总分

要求：

1. 表明写信目的

2. 介绍活动相关内容

3. 建议他上网搜索，简要了解汉服

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

Be interested in/ invite sb to do sth/ have a better understanding of/ be glad to do sth/ surf the internet/ broaden one’s horizon/ visual feast/ have a good knowledge of/be dressed in/ make up/ have a history of

第三步：连词成句

knowing that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, I am delighted to invite you to enjoy a show called Hanfu with me.

Now, I will tell you something about the show in detail.

The performance will be held at 9:00 a.m. next Saturday in the hall of our school, which will surely enrich our school life and promote traditional Chinese culture,

It will be a great show played by senior two students dressed in Hanfu.

Undoubtedly, it will be a visual feast.

Besides, it is suggested that you should surf the Internet for the introduction of Hanfu, which will be helpful to appreciate the show.

I’d appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）

表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）