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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。

One day, when I was about 5 or 6 years old, my parents went to a trip. Grandma seemed so happy to take care of me which she made me a special breakfast. Therefore, I complained about the food she cooked, Grandma quiet put down the bowl and went into the living room. I followed and saw tear in her eyes. It was the first time that I have ever seen my strong grandmother to cry. And I knew I was the one who had caused it. I apologized and asked her to forgive me. She smiled and told me I was good boy even if I didn't feel like one then. That memory will stay in her heart forever, because I learn that ask for forgiveness helps me to learn and grow.

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【解析】1.固定搭配：go for a trip/go on a trip去旅行，故把to---for/on。

2.固定搭配：so---that---，如此---以致于---（结果状语从句），故把which---that。

3.句意：奶奶很开心照顾我，以致于为我做特殊的早饭。但是我抱怨奶奶为我做的饭。前后表示转折，故把Therefore---However。

4.副词修饰动词，故把quiet---quietly。

5.句意：我跟着并看到她的眼中有泪水。故把tear---tears。

6.固定句式：It was the first time that 主语+过去完成时态+---。故把have---had。

7.固定搭配：see sb. do sth.看见某人做某事了，故把句中seen my strong grandmother to cry.的to去掉。

8.句意：她微笑着告诉我我是一个好孩子。根据句意可知在boy前加a。

9.句意：那种记忆将留在我的心中。故把her---my。

10.句意：请求原谅帮助我学习和成长。此处是动名词做主语，故把ask---asking。