Question

16．今年寒假，我的邻居-来青务工的老吴，没有回老家过年．他的孩子东东与我成了好朋友，我们常在一起做作业，我帮他学英语，带他到海边玩，还为他买了新年礼物…．东东过得很快乐，我也感到很有意义．
请根据提示用英语写一篇题为What I did is worthwhile的短文，发送到China Daily"寒假征文"栏目．
注意：
1．可适当发挥，增加细节，使行文连贯、完整；
2．词数120-150字．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇开放式作文，写作时不仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．
亮点句型一：His child，whose name is Dongdong，is a lovely and clever boy．他的孩子，名叫东东，是一个可爱聪明的男孩．
亮点句型二：He told me that this was the most interesting Spring Festival he had had．他告诉我这是他过的最有趣的春节．

解答 Every winter holiday，most people who work outside return home to reunite with their family．But this year，my neighbourhood，Lao Wu，didn't．His wife and child were along with him，so he chose to stay in Qingdao．【老吴没回家过年】
   His child，whose name is Dongdong，is a lovely and clever boy．（亮点句型一）Because school was over，he started to play with me together．Soon we became good friends．We talked a lot，and we often did our homework together．I helped him with his English．One day I even took him to play at the seaside．When the Spring Festival came，I bought him some presents for the coming new year．He was very happy and of course，thankful to me．He told me that this was the most interesting Spring Festival he had had．（亮点句型二）As to me，I also found it so meaningful．【对留守儿童的帮助】
  Friendship is always valuable to everyone，isn't it？

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．