Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Eric希望参加你校组织的古筝兴趣班。请根据以下要点，用英语给他回一封电子邮件。

1. 古筝兴趣班成立的宗旨；

2. 古筝兴趣班的每周活动安排；

3. 愿意提供帮助。

注意： 1、词数100左右；

2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3、开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：兴趣班 Interest Class

Dear Eric,

How’s everything going?

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Eric,

How’s everything going?

I am glad to hear that you wish to join the guzheng interest class organized by our school.

The original purpose of the guzheng interest class was to let more people know about traditional Chinese culture. Make more people interested in the ancient town. Our guzheng interest class rehearses every Friday at 8:00 p.m. in the auditorium, which is located in the east of the school. There will be about 30 people in our guzheng ensemble. If you're interested, I'm willing to help.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Eric回一封电子邮件。

第一步: 审题

体裁: 应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构: 总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 古筝兴趣班成立的宗旨；

2. 古筝兴趣班的每周活动安排；

3. 愿意提供帮助。

第二步: 列提纲 (重点词组)

be glad to；purpose of；be willing to；look forward to

第三步: 连词成句

I am glad to hear that you wish to join the guzheng interest class organized by our school.

The original purpose of the guzheng interest class was to let more people know about traditional Chinese culture.

Our guzheng interest class rehearses every Friday at 8:00 p.m. in the auditorium, which is located in the east of school.

There will be about 30 people in our guzheng ensemble.

If you're interested, I'm willing to help.

Looking forward to your reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步: 连句成篇 (衔接词)

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand, On the other hand, while, as for

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步: 润色修改