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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday I witness a traffic accident on my way home. I was wandering down the sidewalk while there went loud crash. Two taxis crashed into each other about ten meters far away. I went up and found the two drivers bad injured, bleeding and trap in the taxis. Luckily, they were rescued on time because people came to help them and called an ambulance. As was clear that the taxi drivers were so eager to take more passengers that they drove too fast. It reflected their lack of concern for the safe of both others and them.


【小题1】Witness改成witnessed
【小题2】while改成when
【小题3】went前面加a
【小题4】去掉far
【小题5】bad改成badly
【小题6】trap改成trapped
【小题7】on 改成in
【小题8】As改成it
【小题9】safe改成safety
【小题10】them.改成themselves

解析试题分析:文章介绍作者在上星期天在回家路上见到的一场交通事故,两辆车相撞,司机受伤很严重,幸运的是他们及时被送到医院,作者呼吁要关注人身安全。
【小题1】时间是Last Sunday,Witness用过去时,改成witnessed
【小题2】while引导时间状语,表示“一段时间”,when 是“这时”,表示“时间点”,句意:我正在路上走,这时听见一声撞击声。
【小题3】a loud crash泛指“一声很响的撞击声”
【小题4】ten meters away.是“距离有10米远”,去掉多余的far
【小题5】修饰形容词injured 应该用副词:badly
【小题6】two drivers 和trap是被动关系,用过去分词做状语trapped
【小题7】on time“准时”, in time及时,句意:幸运的是他们被及时救了。
【小题8】As引导的是非限制性定语从句,这句话明显不是: it is clear that...很明显...,it是形式主语,
【小题9】句意:这表明他们缺乏最自己和别人安全的关心。用名词safety
【小题10】用themselves指代 the taxi drivers
考点:考查短文改错

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