Question

假定你是李华，准备参加学校举办的主题为“当代中学生应具备的最重要的品质”的英语演讲比赛。请按下列要求写一篇120词左右的演讲稿。短文的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。最重要品质主要包括：

1.有强烈的求知欲；

2.善良、诚实、谦虚、自信；

3.勤奋、执著、积极向上；

4.有强烈的责任感。

参考词汇:乐观的optimistic 执著persistent 勤奋diligent

Hello,everyone!I’m glad to make a speech here.My topic is: What are the most important qualities that_______________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________

That’s all.Thank you.

Answer 1

Hello,everyone!I’m glad to make a speech here.My topic is: What are the most important qualities that middle school students today should have?

In my opinion,the most important qualities can be summarized as follows. First,a strong desire for knowledge is of great importance because it motivates us to seek for knowledge constantly. Second ,kindness, honesty,modesty and self-confidence are also important qualities,which are part of our personality and contribute to our future development.Third,diligence,persistence and optimism are also essential for us because those who are more optimistic, diligent and persistent are likely to succeed no matter what they do. What’s more, having a strong sense of responsibility is equally important because we should be responsible for life and our future.

That’s all.Thank you.

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语in one’s opinion在某人看来；be of importance 重要；seek for 寻找；What’s more而且；Second ,kindness, honesty,modesty and self-confidence are also important qualities,which are part of our personality and contribute to our future development.这个句子中which引导非限制性定语从句；Third,diligence,persistence and optimism are also essential for us because those who are more optimistic, diligent and persistent are likely to succeed no matter what they do这个句子不仅仅运用到定语从句还运用到no matter what 引导的让步状语从句；

考点： 提纲类作文